Emily and the Oracle

I don't, erm, don't really have a perspective. My stories are in all types of ones. However, the second and the Buchanan Perspective I have never really...done. Buchanan Perspective is ...

that was fantastic. i loved it, its got great character and potential. i understood the part of your story with Kathira's woods so dont worry, your visuals were pretty good ...

I see what you mean...I thought I was doing pretty good with visualizing, but I will certainly work on it! As for the example, not to back talk or critic ...

First and foremost, this is just a giant wall of text. If anything repels a reader off, it's that . Try putting spaces between your paragraphs. Ex. Instead of The ...

welcome! im new too but dont worry about having a long post or sounding nervous. this is a writing site, you are supposed to rant on and on about whatever ...

Chapter One: It I felt, rather than saw, the light fall onto me. For at the moment I couldn’t see much at all. Nothing but the dim memories and pasts ...

It was a very nice poem, but you seemed to be putting a bunch of fancy words in to cover up the confusion. I really didn't get it at all. ...

Oh, just...wow! I really liked it! However... It gave me a sense of something. An outline. But it did not fill the outline in. I liked it, it gave me ...

Hello, name is Emily. I...erm...well, I don't know what to say. I suppose I'll start off by telling a little about myself? If that is not conceited? I am thirteen. ...